Last night we walked along the eastern edge of the city and visited Waterfront Park, a beautiful, kid-friendly park with a splashing fountain, pier, and stunning views of Charleston Harbor. As we strolled along, the boys pointed out Fort Sumter and Fort Moultrie, tried to find the U.S.S. Yorktown far across the water, breathed in the smell of pluff mudd, and delighted in a dolphin swimming close by. We remembered the projects and reports they worked so hard on during the past school year, discussed the devastating fire and earthquake that wreaked havoc upon the city in the 1860s, and talked about the old city walls and whether or not they are old enough to go on a ghost tour (“Not yet,” was my answer).
Will and Ben in front of the fountain
It is always fun for me to see the dawning of
understanding when children make real connections between what they have been
taught in school and what they experience in the “real world.” Charleston is
more than good food, great gelato, and fun tourist attractions—I have long known
this, and I am glad that my boys are learning this lesson so young. As I sit on
my sister’s screened-in back porch drinking iced coffee, writing, and watching
my puppy play, the early-morning sounds of the nearby salt marsh draw me in and
I look forward to our day ahead.
I hope you enjoy my poem for today! Happy Writing!
CHARLESTON
NIGHTS
As
twilight falls, the line between past and present blurs.
Lessons
forgotten in summer’s lull surface like the dolphins playing in the pink
harbor water,
Bringing
projects and tests and restless study sessions to life.
History
is not just stuff teachers talk about.
Sumter
and Hunley, sweetgrass and slavery are more than words;
They
are threads that compose the city’s fabric, for better or for worse.
The
night comes, suspended between then and now,
While
crickets and cicadas clamor in the swaying palmettos.
I pulled them in for a hug, but not fast
enough to catch the dolphin in the photo!
Yes, Charleston seems to be an amazing place loaded with stories, and probably ghosts. Look at you there with your boys.... Awesome.
ReplyDeleteWe learn new stories every time we visit, Mirka! = )
DeleteI loved reading this post! I've been dying to go to Charleston for couple of years now. It's where my next story is going to take place at, and I'd love to see it in person sometime!
ReplyDeleteI highly recommend a visit to Charleston, Leandra. If you go, consider staying at Middleton Place Inn. It is on the property of an old rice plantation outside the city, and is beautiful and quite reasonable for Charleston prices. I hope you get to visit soon!
DeleteWonderful! SO happy you are there visiting. Enjoy! I miss you and love you! :-)
ReplyDeleteMiss you, Laura! We had fun, but wish all of you could have been there, too! = )
DeleteI enjoyed the "crickets and circadas clamor in the swaying palmetos." great line. i like the assonance and alliteration. nicely done.
ReplyDeleteYour poems gives a real sense of place. And time.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mary Lee. It is fun to try to capture this within the confines of a poem!
DeleteI like the sound of your visit!
ReplyDelete"The night comes, suspended between then and now" -- I can feel what you mean. Also, I like that the lessons "surface." Great description.
How great that your boys are getting to experience history first hand. I especially love the sound of "Sumter and Hunley, sweetgrass and slavery" and also crickets and cicadas clamor.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Carol. We also visited Fort Moultrie this weekend and learned even more about the area! I hope all of this "sticks" in the boys' brains! = )
DeleteLovely poem! It makes me want to visit Charleston.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Barb!
DeleteI don't blame you for not taking them on the ghost walk yet. Sounds like a good trip, and I like your poem.
ReplyDeleteCharleston is on my short list of places to visit. Your post just made me want to go there more. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun time you must have had! I loved the line: "threads that compose the city’s fabric" in your poem!
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