Thanks to Laura at Author Amok for
hosting Poetry Friday this week!
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One of my favorite local spots is the
Riverwalk Trail in Rock Hill, SC. This local gem is a beautiful paved
trail that winds through the woods alongside a section of the Catawba River, an ever-changing stretch of water whose mood is determined by the release of the dam a few miles upstream. On any given
day, you can find walkers, runners, bikers, moms with strollers, kayakers,
river tubers, nature lovers, and more alongside or on the river. There is also a variety of wildlife to see along the trail, if you keep your
eyes and ears open.
On a recent morning walk, I was struck
by the poetic nature of the river path—it’s people, animals, sights, and
sounds. By the end of my walk, I had a good start to the poem below. I hope you
enjoy!
RIVERWALK
River walk, river run
River
sparkles in the sun
River run, river race
Pounding
feet keep steady pace
River race, river roll
Babies slumber, mamas stroll
River roll, river ride
Water
lovers splash and glide
River ride, river flow
River ride, river flow
Rising,
falling, swift and slow
River
flow, river roar
Turtles
plummet, eagles soar
River
roar, river song
Humming,
thrumming, drumming strong
River
song, river home
Calling
back all those who roam
Happy Friday, and Happy Writing!
Beautiful last line to this poem, Becky! We're having a late burst of heat in Maryland, but it's almost time for fall hiking.
ReplyDeleteThank you!! I did some pre-fall hiking in the NC mountains last weekend. I am looking forward to cooler temps and fall color, too!
DeleteThis would make a great picture book, Becky! I want to be there :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Tabatha. I am very thankful for this Carolina treasure!
DeleteYou're lucky to have such a beautiful place to walk, Becky. I love how the rhythm moves like the river, and your rhymes are terrific. I'd love to take a walk there!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Linda! = )
DeleteBecky, I was in Connecticut this week delivering professional development on Fishers Island and passed many beautiful rivers. Your poem captures the feeling of those who enjoy the river's call.If this photo is a summer shot, I would like to place it and the poem in the Summer Serenity Gallery at http://beyondliteracylink.blogspot.com/2014/06/summertimes-alluring-call-to-relax.html or http://beyondliteracylink.blogspot.com/2014/08/summer-serenity-photo-essay-unfolds-in.html. I am unveiling the gallery this weekend (hopefully) so please let me know if you are interested.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Carol. I would be honored to be included in the Summer Serenity Gallery! These pics were taken last week, and it is still very much summer here in SC! = )
DeleteBecky, thanks for your collaborative spirit.
DeleteEnjoyed your poem, Becky! Lovely images and I got caught up in the rhythm and flow . . . :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Jama! = )
DeleteThank you for the comment:) The place is fantastic and the poem is beautiful,love it :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful scenery and beautiful poem, Becky. I love the flowing nature of the poem, each stanza building on the last. = )
ReplyDeleteThanks, Bridget. I had fun writing it!
DeleteLovely photos and poem, Becky. I think walking and writing go hand-in-hand.
ReplyDeleteYes! I will have to try this more often! = )
DeleteWow, I loved this poem. Especially the way you linked each stanza to the one before it. I like how you bookended it with the photos of the river trail and then the river itself.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Ramona!
DeleteBecky - another wonderful piece and beautiful poem! I love the idea of freedom wandering, yet being called back to the fold that your words whisper to me...
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ann! = )
DeleteLovely. I could "see" the images, beyond the photos you posted. (Love those also)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mirka! It is a busy, busy place most mornings.
DeleteJust lovely...I'm thinking picture book, too!
ReplyDeleteHmmm...I'm liking this picture book idea! = )
DeleteBecky,
ReplyDeleteThis is great! I really liked the pattern that carried from stanza to stanza. Fun to read and very clever!
Thank you, Linda!
DeleteAgree with one of the comments above. This would be a great picture book! I really loved this poem! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Laura!!
DeleteGreat last line. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Kelly! = )
DeleteBeautiful! Love the rhythm and set up of this poem. Paints a beautiful, beautiful picture!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Donna! Hope to see you at the SCWBI conference in two weeks! = )
DeleteHello there Becky, I so love the sound and sight and smell of the river, thank you for bringing this place alive to us through your words.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your kind words, Myra. It is an inspiring place!
DeleteWhat everyone else said, but mostly I second your brilliant use of the winding flow of the repeated words that carry the reader and the eye from stanza to stanza. Huzzah! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Mary Lee!
DeleteLovely and so are the photos. I could imagine being there :)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Catherine. I am glad you enjoyed it! = )
DeleteHow lucky you are to have such an inspiring place to roam in. Beautiful poem...it read like a river flows.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Katie!
DeleteI really liked those last two lines -- what is is about a river that calls and anchors us?
ReplyDeleteThat is a beautiful way to put it, Karen--a river definitely "calls and anchors us." Love this!
DeleteA beautiful poem, Becky! It definitely does have picture book potential. I can feel the pace of your walking as you wrote this in your head. The poem has a great sense of movement as you reflect on all your observations. I also love how you brought it home in the end.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michelle. I was actually walking as I "wrote" the first draft, which is probably why it seems to have a pace to it! = )
DeleteGosh, love your river poem, Becky. It's like a picture book for me.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Claudine!
DeleteI would love to walk alongside that river one day. I very much enjoyed the poem and the beautiful picture.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Barbara!
DeleteI love the photos. Your poem has strong visual imagery and a haunting rhythm. Congrats!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Barbara!
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