Thanks
to Diane at Random Noodling for hosting Poetry Friday this week!
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On two days last week, I had the pleasure of talking about poetry with a class of
kindergarteners at a local elementary school. On the first day we talked all
about poetry, including different types of poems and different characteristics
of poems—rhyming vs. non-rhyming, silly vs. serious, fiction vs. non-fiction,
etc. Then we read LOTS of different types of poetry from books I’d brought with
me to the classroom. It was especially fun to read several poems from the The Poetry Friday Anthology (one of my
favorite poetry resources) aloud to the kids!
Towards
the end of our first session, I announced that we were going to write a class
poem together. First, several kids suggested topics to write about and then
they voted and decided that our poem would be about a butterfly. Next, the
class voted on whether they wanted to write a rhyming or a non-rhyming poem,
and rhyming won. Then they voted on whether to write a silly poem or a serious
poem. Silly won the vote, but by a surprisingly slim margin. Finally, with our
main points ironed out and about 15 minutes left on the clock, we started
writing.
My
main goal was to lead kids through a real-life poetry writing session and to
model that there is no “right” way to write a poem, so we began by brainstorming
aloud. Then together we came up with a great first line and I wrote everything
down on a large sheet of chart paper. A little farther into our writing time, the
kids decided that they wanted our poem to have a surprise ending, so I went
back and scribbled through the first line and we came up with another. As we
crafted our poem, I scribbled and crossed things out, and our words
evolved into a funny, creative, messy, beautiful poem. I explained to the kids
that this is the way writing often goes, and that it is perfectly fine to write
a “sloppy copy” and then edit your work before you present your finished
product. So when we were through writing and editing the poem together, the
kids headed out to the playground and I copied the finished poem onto a clean
sheet of chart paper. When they came back in from the playground, their cleaned-up
poem was waiting for them!
Tickle Surprise
by Mrs. Mayhew and Mrs. Dixon’s kindergarten class
I felt a tickle
on my head
But had no clue
what was there,
Until my best
friend stopped and said,
“There’s a big
BUG in your hair!”
I screamed and
yelled and jumped and shook,
And waved my
hands up in the sky.
Then my best
friend said, “Oh, look!
It’s just a pretty butterfly!”
I LOVE talking to kids about poetry, and had such a
wonderful time with these sweet, brilliant children. One of my favorite things
in life is seeing children light up when being read a great poem or book, and
reading poems and stories that kids have excitedly labored over. I’ve talked
with lots of older elementary students about poetry and writing over the past
several years, but this was entirely different and definitely just as fun. One
of my favorite moments was when two little girls came and shared with me a poem
they’d just composed together—on the playground!
Awhile back I shared another poetry-writing-with-kids
experience, and you can read more about that here if you are interested.
Have a great Friday and a wonderful weekend, and Happy Writing!
Thank you to Mrs. Mayhew, Mrs. Dixon, and their
amazing kindergarten class
at Sugar Creek Elementary School for all the fun!
Sounds like you had so much fun, Becky. I love that poem, Tickle Surprise, that you co-wrote with the class!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Claudine! The kids were very excited about the title they chose!
DeleteI like that you pointed out that a "sloppy copy" is normal. Many kids think that writers and artists sit down and a perfect piece pops out. More kids might take to writing if they realized that genius is nothing more than work.
ReplyDeleteThat is what I was hoping they'd get from it. And you are 100% correct--genius IS nothing more than work!
Delete"Tickle Surprise" turned out so well! (And what a perfect title!)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Tabatha!
DeleteEnjoyed reading all about the group poem you and the kids wrote together. Just the word "tickle" makes me happy. Cute poem!
ReplyDeleteTickle is a great word, isn't it? = )
DeleteI love the way you taught the poetry writing process. Kids created a group poem to be proud of and they made lovely gifts for their moms. Awesome!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Linda!
DeleteReminds me of a group poem my sixth graders wrote about our field trip to the zoo! It was such fun to compose together! It's fun to see the process in action. And those poems for moms - priceless! Our Mother's Day writing projects were always one of the high points of our writing year!
ReplyDeleteThe personal poems are the best, I think--I am sure the moms loved their gifts!
DeleteHi, Becky--
ReplyDeleteAs a fulltime K teacher, I can tell you that 5- and 6-year-olds are the most natural poets around--they play with words effortlessly the way we adults have to struggle sometimes! Here's my recent blogpost featuring poems by my kindergarteners at the end of a year of regular exposure to poetry and a week of intensive poetry study: http://myjuicylittleuniverse.blogspot.com/2015/05/what-do-kindergarten-poets-do.html
Glad you had so much fun with your Kinders!
I loved your post, Heidi! Thank you so much for sharing the link here. When I taught 3rd grade, I tried to incorporate some kind of poetry every day. The kids loved it, and so did I! = )
DeleteSounds like you gave them quite a gift. The end result turned out cute, too!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Marcia!
DeleteA winning collaboration, for sure! I really enjoyed hearing about your process, Becky, and can only imagine how excited those kids must have been to see their final masterpiece.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michelle!
DeleteYou gave those kids a memorable gift, Becky. I would have loved that class not only at their age but today also.
ReplyDeleteThis is really good Becky! You might want to submit this to Highlights for their kids page or Stone Soup. And the kids can have a surprise when they come back in the fall as they enter Grade 1. What a wonderful gift you are giving these kids regardless.
ReplyDeleteLove the poem, Becky! Talking writing with kids has become one of my favorite things to do as an author. Sounds like you gave your students an amazing time.
ReplyDeleteHow lucky we (fellow) poets are that you're out there doing great work with kids! And thank you for sharing poems from The Poetry Friday Anthology series!!!
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